Wake up; your life is on fire,
Washed down the drain when I
Walk into the room.
I’m here to take away your innocence
But I’ll replace it with love
So don’t worry your pretty little head.
Break out of that shell.
Break the shell of your own flesh.
Break free in a bloody, painful,
Beautiful, rhythmic moment of
Sensuous, unadulterated bliss.
My shoes guard the door.
But the fact remains.
I talk the talk but
I’m
Just
As
Innocent
As
You are too preoccupied right now
To notice as I bumble my way
Through this.
Through you.
Whatever you do, keep your eyes closed
don't look at me
And your back arched
Let me in
And I will love you for forever.
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also called "First Love"
although this poem is ultimatey autobiographical, i dont think the narrator sounds much like myself.  thinks that he does but to me he seems likea shallow, heartless fiend.you deicde love you kirsty x |
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i think it is the mostperfect thing i have ever read.
i cant describe what it does to me.
its amazing.
and i think the narrator is passionate, deeply in love and gentle, not an asshole at all
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my poetry *iheartpirates
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I wont be afraid, I'll stand by you, and I will understand you ♥
Well done Tim!
Bobbiex
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It's better now, with fire on your tongue.
It is so true and so wonderful.
Love you to xxx
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[Please Just Don't Play With Me, My Paper Heart Will Bleed]
I talk the talk but
I’m
Just
As
Innocent
As
You are too preoccupied right now" ~ Pulled off quite nicely.
And I'd say it's definitely not assholeish, but more acknowledging the role you've been pushed into by the way women act and what they desire
More of a realization piece than anything.
I can kind of see the asshole-ishness But I see it more as a front, and that the actuality is that he's really insecure.
I think it's aceness.
xxx
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This is it. This is life.
"I'M NOT GETTING DEFENSIVE"
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~When I'm here with you, the world could be burning 'til there's nothing but Dark Blue~
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